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Babbler
- Non-Humanoid Form has lots of extra spaces in front of it.
Chameleon Man
- At-Will dimension door is way too strong for +1 LA, 2HD or not.
- Dragonfire Adept/Dragon Shaman ACFs missing gemstone dragons.
Sis'thik
- Female stats aren't tagged as female.
Crocodilian Brute
- Barbarian ACF should say what happens if you don't have DR yet.
Gurrash
- Barbarian ACF says Bakali.
Demarax
- I'm on the fence if this should have an LA. I'm leaning towards no, it's pretty interesting.
Marl
- You need rules text on the variable amount of arms it can have.
Flailer
- You've got extra spaces again.
- Flailer Adventures has a line with just the letter A.
- Ambush Power is Metapsionic, should it require being psionically focused?
Dracon
- Extra spaces.
- Foe of the Dark One needs a favored enemy bonus +.
- Knight ACF Halberd Defense is only half of a sentence.
- Paladin ACF needs a duration or a limitation. Right now there's no rules text preventing unlimited weapons.
Gaund
- Extra spaces again.
- Frost Gaund, do you mean cold damage with Burning Gaze? If so, please clarify and also give rules text about the interaction with the Burning Gaze feats.
Kla'a-tah
- Even more extra spaces.
- Glutton Killer feat needs a favored enemy bonus +.