Rescue Worker (and some other stuff that I forgot to mention and don't remember) doesn't have a sentence about entering the PrC. Just FYI, not sure if this is a real concern.
Ruhigbar ACFs should be moved out of the Rescue Worker post.
Koalinth ACFs should be moved out of the Shark Rider post.
- Fighter ACF says you can only pick a Large shark, but the only shark available for a 4th level Ranger is Medium. Don't limit it to size, just say Shark. (I'd say the same for all the ACFs that give you a shark.
- Also, a Paladin can have a Large Shark as a special mount, just fyi.
Norker ACFs should be moved out of the Norker Warror post.
Norker Warrior has Listen as a class skill, give it Spot.
Thoul Warror
- Has Listen as a class skill, give it spot.
- Has a typo in Will saves, they're all 1 higher than they should be.
- Improved Healing needs to state what happens if you've got Regeneration from the Improved Healing feat.
Thoul ACFs should be moved out of the Thoul Warrior post.
- Also there's no rogue ACF text.
Toad Sticker
- Bleeder says and instead of an.
- Veteran, additional die (2d6 instead of 1d6) or goes up a die (1d8 instead of 1d6)?
- Precision, just say "your attacks ignore concealment, including total concealment as long as you target the correct square."