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« on: September 13, 2012, 04:25:39 PM »
Arsenal



How many weapons does a mecha need? As many it can fit on its body and still move of course!

Special weapons
Accessories

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Damage is for medium-sized mechas, adjust accordingly to mechas of different sizes.

Combat Weapons
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Mecha weapons can come in a variety and shapes and styles depending on their faction, builder and pilot.

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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2017, 10:50:32 AM »
Special Weapons
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Special weapons were designed for those rare situations where simply shooting more isn't the answer.
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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2017, 09:04:42 PM »
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Equipped with an Assault Blade, Chokabam Armor, Cape and a Bio Sensor, this Gespent is ready for war!



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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2017, 02:05:06 AM »
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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2018, 11:31:15 AM »
Did you have a comfy rest from copyediting? Good, here's more.

  • The intro line should start with "How many weapons does a mecha need?"
  • In Brutal, "This ranged weapons" should be "This ranged weapon".
  • In Finesse, "This melee weapons" should be "This melee weapon".
  • In Jammer, "on their names" should be "in their names".
  • In Gravity Wall and Gravity Wall Prototype, "You can turn off or on this abilty" should be "You can turn this ability off or on".
  • In Jammer, "on their names" should be "in their names".
  • In Regeneration and Reactor, "begginning should be spelled "beginning".
  • In Stealth, "whitout" should be spelled "without".
  • In the Smoke Launcher description, remove "away" from "An area attack disperses away the smoke in the damaged area".
  • In the Multi Wire description, "This works as they both" should be "This works as them both"
  • In the title of the Accessories section, "Acessories" should be spelled "Accessories".
  • At the start of the Accessories section, "noticed" should be spelled "noted" and "acessories" should be spelled "accessories".
  • In every shield description (all 21), "rise up your shield" should be "raise your shield"
  • In Nano Seals, "acessory" should be spelled "accessory".
  • In all three Extender descriptions, "whitin" should be spelled "within".
  • In all the Propelant accessories, the name of the accessory and all the places that refer to it should be spelled "Propellant" instead. (20 total cases including one in the footnote at the bottom of the accessories list).
  • In Lightwave Barrier, "without missile on their names or beam on their names" should be "without "missile" or "beam" in their names".
  • In Lightwave Barrier, "You can turn off or on this abilty" should be "You can turn this ability off or on"
  • In Dynamic Cartridges, "Cardtridge" should be spelled "Cartridge" (one time in the description).
  • In Dynamic Cartridges, Dynamic Propellants, and Dynamic Repair Kit, "does not provokes" should be "does not provoke".
  • In Ceramic Shield, there's an extra perion in on sentence.
  • In Turbo Cartridge, "Cardtridge" should be spelled "Cartridge" (one time in the description).
  • In Turbo Propellant, "Cardtridge" should be "Propellant".
  • In Turbo Propellant, there's an extra newline partway through the description.
  • In Turbo Cartridges, Turbo Propellant, and Turbo Repair Kit, and Emergency Rations, "does not provokes" should be "does not provoke".
  • In Emergency Rations, "A Emergency Rations" should be "An Emergency Rations".
  • In Phase Shift Barrier, "You can turn off or on this abilty" should be "You can turn this ability off or on".
  • In Photon Radar, "each choosing a new option" should be "each time choosing a new option"
  • In Photon Familiar, "acessory" should be spell "accessory" twice.
  • In Photon Familiar, there should be a period after "is gained".
  • In Laplace's Laptop, "acessory" should be spell "accessory".
  • In the first note at the bottom of the accessories section, "equiped" should be spelled "equipped".
  • At the end of the Accessories section, "Equiped" should be spelled "Equipped".

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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2018, 09:44:08 PM »
Typos cle∀ned, thanks!

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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2018, 03:30:23 AM »
Just a few more things:

  • In Nano Seals, "acessory" should be spelled "accessory".
  • In Automatic Aegis and Ceramic, Orichalcum, and Lacanium Shields, "bonus are lost" should be "bonuses are lost".
  • In all the other shields, "you lose the bonus" should be "you lose the bonuses".
  • In Laplace's Laptop, "acessory" should be spell "accessory".
  • In the final footnote, "the radar senses that allows" should be "the radar senses that allow".

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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2018, 04:15:12 AM »
Done too.

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Re: Arsenal
« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2018, 11:53:52 AM »
Excellent, thanks.