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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #460 on: March 05, 2018, 12:44:35 PM »
He didn't, but okay.

He asked me before you told me that this was done.  So he asked first.   :P

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #461 on: March 11, 2018, 09:49:34 PM »
PDF needs a title page.   :P

I'm going to skim everything that isn't crunch because I'm assuming all of the flavor and base system mechanics are the same.

Page 4 (first page of Races) is broken up really weird.  The table seems to have messed with how the columns are set up.

Helfarch Consumptive Gift says Must instead of May.  That will make combat against groups difficult.  :p

I've said it before and I'll say it again, adding Siphoning Touch to the Ritualist really makes me happier with him from both a power as well as a flavor perspective.  All of his touch attack rituals make sense now.

Staunch says "rather than dying at -20..", did I miss a class ability that increases death from -10 to -20?

The Conjoined Ritual feat has a bolded Benefits word in the Benefits section from a find/replace.


Done up to rituals.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #462 on: March 13, 2018, 05:55:38 PM »
There was an extra section break on Page 4. It's removed.

All Consumptive Gifts say "Must". They also say "It will only overcome the compulsion to feed when already affected by a ritual created by Consumptive Gift or when in danger, at which time it will defend itself or run." It's not really an issue.

Staunch - Check the Diehard ability earlier on. Moves it to -20.

Conjoined - Sorted.

Also, the base system mechanics are almost the same. I tweaked the values for Spellcraft and a few other things. You might want to take a gander at them.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #463 on: March 14, 2018, 10:11:32 PM »
I can make tongue sticking out faces if I want.   :P

Yep, I missed a class ability!

Ugh, is there anything you didn't tweak?

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #464 on: March 14, 2018, 10:13:50 PM »
I tweaked everything.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #465 on: March 16, 2018, 10:08:11 AM »
Why would you do that?   :P

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #466 on: March 16, 2018, 10:20:24 AM »
That was sort of the point of the project?

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #467 on: March 16, 2018, 11:39:53 AM »
To make me re-review everything?  That's a horrible point.   :lol

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #468 on: March 16, 2018, 11:59:56 AM »
To update everything

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #469 on: March 16, 2018, 12:07:30 PM »
You're no fun today.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #470 on: March 23, 2018, 08:37:54 AM »
Places that will need looking over -
Generate Fog/Fog Bank feats.
Planar Animist Planar Rituals.

Also, editing is done. For the whole book.
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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #471 on: March 23, 2018, 10:26:11 AM »
Trying to make me feel bad?   :P

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #472 on: March 23, 2018, 10:28:00 AM »
Trying to make me feel bad?   :P

Just finishing my work? :twitch

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #473 on: March 23, 2018, 03:42:18 PM »
Tongue sticking out smilies = jokes.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #474 on: March 23, 2018, 04:20:30 PM »
Tongue sticking out smilies = jokes.

Have a looksee. It's been beautified. And you've got your Table of Contents.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #475 on: March 24, 2018, 03:29:26 PM »
 :clap
Your codpiece is a mimic.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #476 on: March 24, 2018, 03:34:09 PM »
:clap

I expect a 10 page book report by Friday  :plotting

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #477 on: March 25, 2018, 02:41:01 PM »
Okay, going through the whole project again.

Races
Niwl - Aberrations normally get Darkvision 60 ft unless otherwise noted. Nothing is otherwise noted in the Niwl entry.

Classes/Prestige Classes
Visually scrolling through the book it is hard to determine where a class entry starts due to the amount of text and the fact that each class has multiple sections.  Please add extra lines between the end of a class and the start of a new one please (or do something else to make the demarcation easier to see).

Magic Items
Supplicant Shield - Adamantium is what Wolverine has on his bones, Adamantine is the 3.5 metal.

Edit: I'll admit that I skimmed but that's all that I found.

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #478 on: March 25, 2018, 03:42:55 PM »
The dark vision is fine.

I'll take a look at it.

I'll fix the material  :P

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Re: Ritual Magic Index & General Discussion
« Reply #479 on: March 25, 2018, 03:56:54 PM »
On Niwl, it isn't listed either way. If keeping the darkvision is the plan then it would probably be best to list it in the racial entry.