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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Nereid
« Last post by RegalKain on March 22, 2019, 10:59:14 AM »
Looks a lot better now honestly, the only other thing I see is a typo.

Novice- At first level the Nereid can use Create Water 2/hour and Air Breathing 2/day per HD. If the Nereid targets herself with Water Breathing, she doesn't expend any uses.


Water Breathing should be Air Breathing here, otherwise it looks excellent, looking forward to the Water moveset. :)


Edit: Upon reading this line again. At first level the Nereid can use Create Water 2/hour and Air Breathing 2/day per HD.

 People may take that as they get Create Water 2/Hour per HD as well, not sure if that is intended or not.
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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Inugami
« Last post by ~Corvus~ on March 22, 2019, 09:13:04 AM »
Indeed, the loophole with Greedy Dog should be fixed. May I recommend:

"Upon killing a creature (or Feeding on, should the Inugami be a Barghest, whichever comes first) the Inugami may make a number of dispel checks   (rolling 1d20+HD vs 11 + the spell’s caster level) against up to its Cha Mod of beneficial Spells/SLA and beneficial Supernatural effects with a duration the creature had active at the moment of its demise to claim the effects for itself"

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Edit: Clarify ability boosts: Are they +X & Y each level? If so, list as +X and +y. Are they +x OR Y each level? If so, make the need for a choice clearer.

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Edit: Mark of the Damned needs some clarity. I recommend the following:

"Any NPCs interacting with a Marked target must make a Will save DC (10+Inugami Level) the first time EACH DAY they interact with, speak of, or otherwise acknowledge the bearer of the Mark; failing this save lowers the subject’s attitude toward that bearer of Mark by one step. Family members of Marked beings automatically succeed on this save for this mark."
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Reminder that Amaterasu and Stephanie still need actions for the round.

Like two posts up  :lmao
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Should I be posting? I am forgetful.
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Somebody define soon  :lmao
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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Inugami
« Last post by Doxkid on March 22, 2019, 12:21:13 AM »
If you intend this to be a barghest PrC and not a vague canine PrC, may as well just require Greater Barghest?
Canines are the natural preference but the lore also allows Weasels, Foxes, Mice, Chimera and a few other creatures to transform into an Inugami as well, so I thought I should just leave the class open to just about any beast that managed to get decent Will+Fort saves. Besides that there's only one ability that directly relates to Barghest (Greedy Dog triggering of killing a target or Feeding as a Barghest).

Greedy Dog itself might need a rework since the current writing is ambiguous enough for some people to benefit from it twice and I'm not sure if I want that to be viable: Kill something to trigger the ability, then Barghest-Feed on the corpse to trigger the ability again.
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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Inugami
« Last post by Raineh Daze on March 22, 2019, 12:13:38 AM »
If you intend this to be a barghest PrC and not a vague canine PrC, may as well just require Greater Barghest?
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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Inugami
« Last post by Doxkid on March 22, 2019, 12:08:02 AM »
Hm, what do you think should fill the levels between Barghest and this, though? A lot of the PrCs in this subforum chain seamlessly.

Fiend of Possession would work although it's capstone abilities are a little redundant. Ur priest works very well since it'll allow for [10 Ur Priest] levels and [10 Barghest/Greater Bargest/Inugami] levels, but it requires 6 Ur Priest levels to enter Inugami and that means you finish the class at level 17; the class is already a bit of a late bloomer, so I'm not sure how I feel about finishing even later than usual even if it's only by one character level.

I was a bit concerned that it would be too powerful when compared to other level 10 creatures, but if there is consensus that it would not be problematic I'll relax the entry requirements. How about: "Will/Fort save +4" (to match what the Barghest+Greater Barghest gets) and a lower number of Hit Die?
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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Nereid
« Last post by oslecamo on March 21, 2019, 11:54:13 PM »
Fixed table, thanks.

Indeed the Nereid isn't amphibious, but she does have the Air Breathing spell as SLA that does exactly what it says. Although at first level duration isn't so good so added clause that targeting herself doesn't expend uses.

Added Create Water with hourly cooldown, good idea.

Also agree with being a bit limited with combat options. Added Water Spell at 3rd level to replicate any [Water] spells by expending Create Water uses, and will do an ACF for that based on pokemon water moves like I did for the celestial/fiendish creature once I have the time. Some other stuff I need to take care before that.

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Oslecamo's Improved Monster Classes / Re: Inugami
« Last post by Raineh Daze on March 21, 2019, 11:43:25 PM »
Hm, what do you think should fill the levels between Barghest and this, though? A lot of the PrCs in this subforum chain seamlessly.
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