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Gloura
« on: July 24, 2015, 11:51:02 PM »
Gloura



HD: d6

LevelBABFortRefWillSpecial
1st+0+0+2+2Gloura Body, Weapon Finesse, Nocturnal, Stonecunning, +2 Dex, -2 Str, +1 Cha
2nd+1+0+3+3 Underdark Air, Stoneblessing, Deep song, +1 Dex
3rd+1+1+3+3Silver Moth, Lunar Way, +1 Cha
4th+2+1+4+4Underdark Air (improved), +1 Dex
5th+2+1+4+4 +1 Cha
6th+3+2+5+5Underdark Air (mastered), +1 Dex
7th+3+2+5+5Unearthly Grace, +1 Cha

Skill Points: 6 + Int Modifier (x4 at 1st level)
Skills : Balance, Bluff, Climb, Concentration, Craft,  Diplomacy, Gather Information, Hide,  Jump, Knowledge (all), Listen, Move Silently, Perform, Search, Sense Motive,  Spellcraft, Spot, Tumble,

Weapon and Armor Proficiency: Gloura are proficient in all simple weapons as well as maces. They are proficient with light armor, but not sheilds. Additionally, a Gloura is proficient with medium armor, if it is made of stone.

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« Last Edit: August 05, 2015, 11:37:02 PM by Chrononaut »

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Re: Gloura
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2015, 01:28:08 PM »
"7th level bard with wings and Cha to saves" would be a pretty solid class if you ask me, but I see you decided to spice things up.

Some initial critiques:

No DR/cold iron? The original monster has it.

You may want to provide a link to the ranger favored enviroment ACF since it isn't part of the basic package. Also it is supposed to scale with level?

You claim that certain abilities are unlocked at 10th/15th level, but the class is only 7 levels long, yet the 5th level abilities appear at the table, meaning you were refering to class levels.

I would suggest moving Unhearthly grace later on the class progression, Cha to all saves is always pretty potent and you're also starting to gain spells at the same level. I would actually suggest make it the capstone, remove the blindsense as it isn't a very typical fey-like ability if you ask me, as they usually like to peek/spy at people with their eyes and stuff (not to mention sound-based blindsense would be kinda pointless with the Waxer's silence SLA). Then put the missing DR/cold iron on 3rd level.


Evil creatures able to hear the song are outlined in silver light proportionate to the strength of their aura generated by detect evil, as per the spell faerie fire, save DC equal to 10 + 1/2 the Gloura's ranks in perform + her charisma modifier - faint evil gives off light as a candle, moderate as strong as a lantern, strong as strong as a light spell, overwhelming as strong as a daylight spell.
What kind of save?

I'm kind of eyeballing spells and powers for songs here, so I probably lowballed or overdrove their power. It's late and I"ll fix it later/after commentary. Even WOTC can't agree, on the website, Gloura have a d6 HD, not a d4 like fey ought in 3.5.

But fey always had  a d6 RHD in 3.5. There's no creature type with racial d4 even... :psyduck

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Re: Gloura
« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2015, 09:18:32 AM »
Wow i'm just mis-remembering. I thought fey had d4's, since wizard of monsters.

I'll get around to editing stuff tonight when I get in, and make their songs dependant on taking levels in bard, otherwise they're kind of nuts.

Edit: And done
« Last Edit: July 27, 2015, 12:15:08 PM by Chrononaut »

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Re: Gloura
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2015, 08:51:48 PM »
Looking better.

DR/10 right away at 3rd level is to much, makes the Gloura a tank by itself, probably better making it scaling.

Faerie fire doesn't have a DC normally, what exactly happens if the other dude saves?

-2 on saves against fear/illusion and then auto-bane on top is too evil, this effect should be the one getting a DC to resist.

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Re: Gloura
« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2015, 11:10:58 PM »
Sorry for the delay in responding, I was out vacationing for the last 5 days.

Anyways I was blindly copying out SP save dC rules (faerie fire seems like it would have a DC for it) but yeah that was just my mistake.

I'll edit in the DR changes and the penalty box will get saves. Actually given the whole moon thing, I think i'll make it DR/cold iron or silver too.

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Re: Gloura
« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2015, 05:21:41 PM »
The grammar and organization could still use some work, but that's something I'm guilty too, so added to the index.