Homebrew Setting: Magipunk (brainstorming -- input needed)

[Nanshork]

sirp, what here did you want me to take a look at?

[Nanshork]

sirp, what here did you want me to take a look at?

 

[sirpercival]

sirp, what here did you want me to take a look at?

 

Derp. I forgot about this.

I'm not done with the Racial Sub Levels, so don't do those yet. But the races, base classes, and prcs are good to go (and there's a brand new prc that no one but me has ever looked at, I think). Also, keep an eye out, as you read this stuff, for any cyberpunk tropes, or holes in the setting, that I've completely missed, so that I can fix the omissions.

[Nanshork]

Anywhere in particular you'd like me to start?

[sirpercival]

Anywhere in particular you'd like me to start?

Maybe the races? Should be easy, there's only like 4 of them.

[Nanshork]

Races aren't in your index.

Also, Lifetorn is in the Magipunk Races thread but also its own thread.  I'm assuming the one in the race thread is the most up to date version?

[Garryl]

sirp, what here did you want me to take a look at?

 

Derp. I forgot about this.

I'm not done with the Racial Sub Levels, so don't do those yet. But the races, base classes, and prcs are good to go (and there's a brand new prc that no one but me has ever looked at, I think). Also, keep an eye out, as you read this stuff, for any cyberpunk tropes, or holes in the setting, that I've completely missed, so that I can fix the omissions.

What's this about a new PrC?

[Stratovarius]

What's this about a new PrC?

http://minmaxforum.com/index.php?topic=17964.0 This guy. Added June 1st.

[sirpercival]

Races aren't in your index.

Also, Lifetorn is in the Magipunk Races thread but also its own thread.  I'm assuming the one in the race thread is the most up to date version?

Yeah I know, I need to fix that. And yes, use the one in the Races thread. Lifetorn used to be the only one, so it had its own thread at the time. I should probably lock it, honestly.

[Nanshork]

Locking the old Lifetorn thread sounds like a good idea.


Lifetorn looks good except that the bonus feat references the list "below" when it's above.

Gremlin looks good.

Cholormorphs, what do they eat?  I'd assume that they photosynthesize.

Cellochoroid's Modular Physiology is really weird.

From the outset the races all look pretty strong but they compare well with the Warforged.  The Gremlin's flight speed is hard to place, I'm not sure about that one.


On to the feats:

Entangling Arms doesn't actually specify that you can't keep using that natural weapon for further attacks while entangling and it feels like it should.

[Nanshork]

 

[sirpercival]

Sorry, I don't have as much time as I used to, years ago. So I get to this stuff as I can. I shall incorporate edits based on your comments probably tomorrow. Next thing to do is start tackling the base classes.

[Nanshork]

Sorry, I don't have as much time as I used to, years ago. So I get to this stuff as I can. I shall incorporate edits based on your comments probably tomorrow. Next thing to do is start tackling the base classes.

Alright, I'll stop being a Naggy Nanshork and give you time.  Let me know when you're ready for me to move on (or if you have feedback about my feedback).