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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #80 on: January 24, 2014, 07:33:01 PM »
Altering the brain is pretty much inevitable at that point. As for reconfiguring him to their needs, well, it's the military that's paying the tabs, and they want results. If the medics can't make the soldier useful to the military again, then they'll be fired. So just doing their jobs.

And the only alternative is the soldier becoming dead/invalid. Are you saying it would be a better act to deliver back a corpse/guy that can't do anything?

The good option would be for the soldier to get the treatment of his choice and sent back home to do whatever he wants.

But this is the neutral option. You were dragged in by the military, you stick with the military, you get altered by the military for military purposes.

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #81 on: January 24, 2014, 07:39:27 PM »
But this is the neutral option. You were dragged in by the military, you stick with the military, you get altered by the military for military purposes.

Er, no, that's the evil option. That goes against basically every right people are guaranteed by law.

I don't get how you are ranking the complete destruction of someone's identity, erasure of all trace of their former physical self, and more or less annihilating their soul (back to the slaad example) as less evil than stealing someone's wallet. What, so soul trapping someone and raising their corpse is perfectly fine? Same effect--the body is now something else, the soul is out of the way.

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #82 on: January 24, 2014, 07:47:43 PM »
But this is the neutral option. You were dragged in by the military, you stick with the military, you get altered by the military for military purposes.

Er, no, that's the evil option. That goes against basically every right people are guaranteed by law.
You should take a closer look at the law then. They can, they do, and they consider themselves exalted paragons of goodness while doing so. Actually, it's worse than I described, because it's 100% legal for recruiters to lie to you all they want before signing the pointed line.

I don't get how you are ranking the complete destruction of someone's identity, erasure of all trace of their former physical self, and more or less annihilating their soul (back to the slaad example) as less evil than stealing someone's wallet.
Yes, I consider that changing someone's personality and body is better than making them slowly starve to death. This is, it's kinda the basis of life. People get reshaped in body and mind all the time to adapt in certain tasks depending on the current needs.

What, so soul trapping someone and raising their corpse is perfectly fine? Same effect--the body is now something else, the soul is out of the way.

There's a big difference between trapping a soul and changing it. You can't use changed soul as spell components for one.

But I guess soul destruction/capture should qualify as tainting acts, gonna add them now.

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #83 on: January 24, 2014, 07:55:23 PM »
But this is the neutral option. You were dragged in by the military, you stick with the military, you get altered by the military for military purposes.

Er, no, that's the evil option. That goes against basically every right people are guaranteed by law.
You should take a closer look at the law then. They can, they do, and they consider themselves exalted paragons of goodness while doing so. Actually, it's worse than I described, because it's 100% legal for recruiters to lie to you all they want before signing the pointed line.

... just because they do it, does not make it neutral. Hint, Lawful Evil is an alignment for a reason.

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I don't get how you are ranking the complete destruction of someone's identity, erasure of all trace of their former physical self, and more or less annihilating their soul (back to the slaad example) as less evil than stealing someone's wallet.
Yes, I consider that changing someone's personality and body is better than making them slowly starve to death. This is, it's kinda the basis of life. People get reshaped in body and mind all the time to adapt in certain tasks depending on the current needs.

People all inevitably die, too. So what if it's hastened by a tiny bit.

People change, sure. There is continuity to that, however, and the person has some influence over it. This goes so far beyond that that it is in all  ways equivalent to killing them. 'People change' does not cover it. 'People change' does not cover erasing all of someone's memory, reshaping their body into an entirely different type of entity, destroying or utilising their soul, and erasing their personality. There isn't the slightest shred of the original person left. That is much, much worse than taking money off someone.

How the hell are you saying that the destruction of a person is fine so long as you're just changing them and don't actually kill them first, but taking a guy's wallet is definitively evil? That doesn't even guarantee starvation.

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What, so soul trapping someone and raising their corpse is perfectly fine? Same effect--the body is now something else, the soul is out of the way.

There's a big difference between trapping a soul and changing it. You can't use changed soul as spell components for one.

But I guess soul destruction/capture should qualify as tainting acts, gonna add them now.

No, you can't use a changed soul as spell components, because you've just used it as a building block. Rather in the same way as using a soul as spell components. It's morally equivalent.

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #84 on: January 24, 2014, 08:02:22 PM »
... just because they do it, does not make it neutral. Hint, Lawful Evil is an alignment for a reason.
Hey, you were the one saying that it was against the law! :P

People all inevitably die, too. So what if it's hastened by a tiny bit.

People change, sure. There is continuity to that, however, and the person has some influence over it. This goes so far beyond that that it is in all  ways equivalent to killing them. 'People change' does not cover it. 'People change' does not cover erasing all of someone's memory, reshaping their body into an entirely different type of entity, destroying or utilising their soul, and erasing their personality. There isn't the slightest shred of the original person left. That is much, much worse than taking money off someone.

How the hell are you saying that the destruction of a person is fine so long as you're just changing them and don't actually kill them first, but taking a guy's wallet is definitively evil? That doesn't even guarantee starvation.
You'll only gain Taint by stealing from the needy.

Anyway, changed people that are still alive can be changed back, getting a person that's dead nondead is considerably more complicated.

No, you can't use a changed soul as spell components, because you've just used it as a building block. Rather in the same way as using a soul as spell components. It's morally equivalent.

Citation needed. Their personality changes. Their memories changes. Nowhere it says their soul is consumed on the process.

Which is further reinforced by the fact that blue slaads are chaotic neutral. If it was such an horrifying experience, don't you think they would be evil, like, say barghests, that actually consume souls?

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #85 on: January 24, 2014, 08:10:46 PM »
People all inevitably die, too. So what if it's hastened by a tiny bit.

People change, sure. There is continuity to that, however, and the person has some influence over it. This goes so far beyond that that it is in all  ways equivalent to killing them. 'People change' does not cover it. 'People change' does not cover erasing all of someone's memory, reshaping their body into an entirely different type of entity, destroying or utilising their soul, and erasing their personality. There isn't the slightest shred of the original person left. That is much, much worse than taking money off someone.

How the hell are you saying that the destruction of a person is fine so long as you're just changing them and don't actually kill them first, but taking a guy's wallet is definitively evil? That doesn't even guarantee starvation.
You'll only gain Taint by stealing from the needy.

Anyway, changed people that are still alive can be changed back, getting a person that's dead nondead is considerably more complicated.

Raise Dead.

To change an Outsider back into anything else, the standard requirement appears to be Wish or Miracle. Er, somehow, I think these two 9th-level spells are much rarer.

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No, you can't use a changed soul as spell components, because you've just used it as a building block. Rather in the same way as using a soul as spell components. It's morally equivalent.

Citation needed. Their personality changes. Their memories changes. Nowhere it says their soul is consumed on the process.

Which is further reinforced by the fact that blue slaads are chaotic neutral. If it was such an horrifying experience, don't you think they would be evil, like, say barghests, that actually consume souls?

Definition of an Outsider. Their soul and their body make one unit. Therefore, it's subsumed into the body--consumed as a building block.

Slaadi are evil; WotC suck at writing Chaotic Neutral races. Basically every other thing about them is using people as hatcheries, random killing, changing people into things... there is a distinct lack of non-sociopathic actions on their part. They don't seem to do any good.

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #90 on: February 01, 2014, 05:23:05 AM »
The contest has been closed! We now have 4 entries total, with Jormengand filling in one entry on GitP! Due to the limited amount of entries, I figure we don't need to announce category winners (what with 2/3rds of them only having one entry), which slightly speeds up the judging process. I'll contact the judges later so we can get to that, and hopefully we'll be done within a week.

The next MUHA, should there come one (highly dependent upon demand), will be fluff-wise in nature like the first one. There would probably be various categories still, with individual winners if there are multiple entries for them (base class, PrC, monster, race, subsystem, Officially Overlooked and Outside-the-Box, probably).

For future MUHAs, what do people think of my move to have it run on both GitP and Minmaxboards simultaneously and together as one contest?

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #91 on: February 01, 2014, 02:16:01 PM »
Taint now lets you be a flagellant? :O

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #92 on: February 01, 2014, 05:42:25 PM »
Tecnically you always could, Taint just allows you to gain an actual mechanical benefit from it. :p

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #93 on: February 03, 2014, 05:30:26 AM »
The contest has been closed! We now have 4 entries total, with Jormengand filling in one entry on GitP! Due to the limited amount of entries, I figure we don't need to announce category winners (what with 2/3rds of them only having one entry), which slightly speeds up the judging process. I'll contact the judges later so we can get to that, and hopefully we'll be done within a week.

The next MUHA, should there come one (highly dependent upon demand), will be fluff-wise in nature like the first one. There would probably be various categories still, with individual winners if there are multiple entries for them (base class, PrC, monster, race, subsystem, Officially Overlooked and Outside-the-Box, probably).

For future MUHAs, what do people think of my move to have it run on both GitP and Minmaxboards simultaneously and together as one contest?
Running together increases the exposure at least, and keeps it from being evaluated based solely on the board culture of one forum. More is better for sure.
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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #94 on: February 17, 2014, 05:44:55 PM »
The Results Are IN!

Before I begin, I must apologize for not having time to properly judge all of the submissions. While I’ve read much of them, I was too occupied with the sign-up process for a new school. As such, I resigned myself to making any tie-breakers, should they be necessary, but it appears that wasn’t necessary!

Unfortunately, two of our judges weren’t heard back from, though it had been unlikely for Welknair to be able to come back anyway. However, the rest of the panel did their task very well, and I trust their judgment completely. I have recently also heard back from MUHA I judge Owrtho, who told me that—though he couldn’t be present to participate or judge this MUHA, he’d be happy to help or participate in future iterations.

“I was really blown away by the quality of the entries,” one of the judges remarked about the MUHA II entries, and I find that telling, as I know all judges to be extensively experienced with creating their own homebrew and taking in the worth of and the effort put into other people’s homebrew.

Jormengand's The Internet received very good scores on Coherence across the board, but wasn’t deemed very original. Its Complexity was rated decently, though one judge scored it really low, so it was deemed either too complex or too simple by them.

Sirpercival's Wisps of Creation received top scores in Flavor, Originality and Coherence. Some of the judges deemed its Balance and Complexity to be off the mark, but they still all gave passing grades in those areas. It was deemed very coherent, though one judge noted that there was a lot of ‘excessive verbiage’ that complicated understanding it.

Veekie's Intimacies was rated very flavorful by everyone, though at least one score in Balance, Originality and Complexity dipped much lower than the rest, so the judges were slightly divided on them.

Oslecamo's Taint was deemed very Coherent by all the judges, so the wording was very clear! It was unfortunately not deemed original by most of the judges, though one of them rated it highly.

And now, the combined scores!



With an overall score of 175 out of 200, Wisps of Creation is the Mixed Ultimate Homebrew Arts II Contest winner! Congratulations, sirpercival, full A score!

I’d love to present some sort of trophy, but unfortunately we lack one at current. Either way, the honours go out to you.

It is left up to the judges whether they wish to reveal their opinion of the entries. Should they wish, I can post their opinions for them so that they may remain fully anonymous.

I have been pleased with the quality of the works that were entered! Slightly less so with the amount, but I’m sure that concern will be alleviated with a more easily understood and less limiting goal, which will also allow us to really pick winners within categories. I’d like to thank the judges for their time and effort in reviewing the entries. I hope to see many of you back for the third iteration of the Mixed Ultimate Homebrew Arts! Thank you, everybody, and see you all in the future!
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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #95 on: February 17, 2014, 06:12:32 PM »
I just want to say that it was a pleasure judging the contest and I'd be happy to help with any future contests.  :)

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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #96 on: February 17, 2014, 06:42:42 PM »
I just want to say that it was a pleasure judging the contest and I'd be happy to help with any future contests.  :)

Same goes for me. Great entries.  :clap
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Re: Non-Usual Homebrew: what to do? Sounding the coming... of MUHA 2!
« Reply #97 on: February 22, 2014, 04:37:48 AM »
That was fun.
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