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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #80 on: September 23, 2017, 09:30:14 PM »
I has limited it to keep it on par with the stygian psionic powers.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #81 on: September 23, 2017, 09:56:58 PM »
Are you talking about Stygian Curse or Stygian Shadow?

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #82 on: September 24, 2017, 04:11:40 AM »
stygian shadow is now on par with stygian ray

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #83 on: September 24, 2017, 11:10:48 AM »
I'll stop making Stygian Shadow suggestions as it's now gone in a different direction.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #84 on: September 24, 2017, 09:45:48 PM »
on to feats then?

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #85 on: September 24, 2017, 09:48:53 PM »
You have four feats with the word Epic in them.  If they aren't actually [Epic] feats then I'd suggest a synonym.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #86 on: September 25, 2017, 06:15:17 PM »
They are sposed to be epic, lemme fix that.

The next two are 5e and 13th age which I'm assuming you don't do, so you might wanna slip down to the Vindicator.
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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #87 on: September 25, 2017, 09:16:17 PM »
I see that they're marked as 5E and 13th Age in the index, but you should mark them that way in the posts too so that people know.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #88 on: September 25, 2017, 10:43:03 PM »
Done.  I await your questions on the Vindicator, cause I'm sure there'll be some on the quest ability I didnt think of.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #89 on: September 26, 2017, 02:34:53 PM »
Vindicator

Proficiencies says "will" instead of "with".

The main thing I see about Vindicator's Quest is that a large amount of monsters are murdered by adventurer's.  Also, kings murder peasants and epic characters murder non-epic people.  I just don't like DM dependent class abilities, but there doesn't seem to be a way around that with this class.

Do the marked penalties stack?  Can I hire an army of vindicators to walk past a grave and accept a quest against someone?

Diplomacy of the Dead needs mechanical effects of having mindless undead be reanimated by their ghosts.  Maybe replace that with at-will Speak with the Dead and the spell can affect mindless undead?  I looked for a better "talk to dead people" spell but couldn't find one.  Remove/replace the Improved Diplomacy of the Dead feat in that case. 

Aura of Terror needs a range.

Greater Quest feat should say that you can't get spellcasting/maneuvers/manifesting.


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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #90 on: September 27, 2017, 03:07:28 AM »
Vindicator

Proficiencies says "will" instead of "with".

The main thing I see about Vindicator's Quest is that a large amount of monsters are murdered by adventurer's.  Also, kings murder peasants and epic characters murder non-epic people.  I just don't like DM dependent class abilities, but there doesn't seem to be a way around that with this class.

Do the marked penalties stack?  Can I hire an army of vindicators to walk past a grave and accept a quest against someone?

Diplomacy of the Dead needs mechanical effects of having mindless undead be reanimated by their ghosts.  Maybe replace that with at-will Speak with the Dead and the spell can affect mindless undead?  I looked for a better "talk to dead people" spell but couldn't find one.  Remove/replace the Improved Diplomacy of the Dead feat in that case. 

Aura of Terror needs a range.

Greater Quest feat should say that you can't get spellcasting/maneuvers/manifesting.

Fixed everythign but diplomacy, I ran out of time.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #91 on: September 27, 2017, 10:25:19 AM »
Quest target penalty stacking still needs to be addressed.  Just give it a type.  If it is meant to stack with everything else, make it a circumstance penalty.  Otherwise, something else.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #92 on: October 01, 2017, 05:16:21 PM »
sorry for the delay, work is disintegrating as we speak

I has altered both

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #93 on: October 01, 2017, 10:12:41 PM »
I hope work doesn't implode!

Quest changes look good.

Diplomacy also looks good, I don't know why I didn't think or just doing something custom instead of using the spell.

On to the next class?

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #94 on: October 02, 2017, 09:25:22 PM »
yuppers!

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #95 on: October 04, 2017, 11:33:17 AM »
The next hexblade class should have Sense Motive as a skill, it has all of the other social skills.

Didn't I review a warlock of yours that used Elicitations?

Actually, that's a good point.  I remember reviewing Elicitations before, did any changes made to those get reflected here if the same mechanics were used?  What's that other class?

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #96 on: October 05, 2017, 04:37:31 AM »
Warmage and Muscle Wizard were the other classes.  I believe the changes should have been made here too.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #97 on: October 05, 2017, 02:50:18 PM »
Warmage is what I'm remembering I think, not Warlock.  Would it be a good idea for me to double check to make sure that things match up?

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #98 on: October 06, 2017, 03:17:12 AM »
If you want, sure.

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Re: Hexblade Luv
« Reply #99 on: October 06, 2017, 10:20:06 AM »
I don't suppose you remember which of your threads had the Warlock in it?