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Improved Earth Mastery: The penalty creatures take from Earth Mastery is enhanced to -1 per 4 HD

"Earth Mastery (Ex): An earth elemental gains a +1 bonus on attack and damage rolls if both it and its foe are touching the ground. If an opponent is airborne or waterborne, the elemental takes a -4 penalty on attack and damage rolls. (These modifiers are not included in the statistics block.) Additionally, an Elemental may move across any sort of earth or stone (such as jagged rocks, quicksand, and similar terrain) at its normal speed and without taking damage or suffering any other impairment."

There is no penalty given for Earth Mastery to other people you see    Unless of Course you want the Earth Elemental to get worse with levels.

Fixed, thanks.

Ripping Gaze: At 5th level creatures looking at the Hound of Tindalos take 1d6 slashing damage, This ability has a range of 30 feet and a Fortitude DC 10+1/2 HD+ Wis mod negates. DR applies against this damage, but it counts as magic and slashing for bypassing it. Creatures that save against this become immune to this Hound of Tindalos gaze for 24 hours.

Is the damage supposed to increase with level? Because the monster in Pathfinder deals 5d6.

From Beyond Time: Hounds of Tindalos enter the physical world on their own in pursuit of those who have trodden too much the netherways beyond time and reality—time travelers (be it physical travel or simply divinatory glimpses forward or backward in time) and creatures that teleport without regard to how this movement impacts subtle magical currents in the multiverse particularly draw their interest.

At 7th level the Hound of Tindalos can use its Angled Entry ability as a swift action, and it gains a bonus equal to 1/3 its HD on all attack rolls, damage rolls, ability DCs, saves, AC, ability checks and skill checks against enemies currently out of their natural time, under the effect of time-bending effects such as Haste, or used any ability to twist time in the last 24 hours, like Time Stop, celerity or any ability that grants extra actions, or used any kind of teleportation effect.

In addition, should any other creature whitin the Hound of Tindalos sight attempts to use any teleportation or time-altering effect whitin the Hound of Tindalos sight, it can instantly teleport to any position adjacent to them and perform a melee attack that ignores all miss chances (including mirror image and similar), DR and hardness. Then the ability resolves as normal, demanding a concentration check to don't lose it if applicable.

Phanes must hate these guys, considering this ability applies to them all the time, and nearly all of their abilities are time-related.

FIRE ELEMENTAL MONOLITH

Hit Die: d8
Prerequisites: Fire Elemental lv11

Level	Bab	Fort	Ref	Will	Feature
1	+0	+0	+2	+0	Growth, Improved Burn, +1 Dex
2	+1	+0	+3	+0	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Cha or Con
3	+2	+1	+3	+1	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Dex
4	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Cha or Con
5	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Dex
6	+4	+2	+5	+2	Enhanced Fire Use, Fiery Discorporation

Class Skills: (2 + Int. Mod.): The Fire Elemental Monolith's class skills are Concentration, Escape Artist, and Intimidate.

Proficiencies: A Fire Elemental Monolith gains no additional proficiencies with weapons or armour.

Features:

Growth: The elemental can assume Gargantuan size. It's slams deal 3d8 damage when Gargantuan.

Improved Burn: The damage die from Burn change to d8's

Ability Increases: A Fire Elemental Monolith receives a bonus to its Dexterity score at every odd level except, and a bonus to either it's Charisma or Constitution scores at every even level except 6th. At 6th level these bonuses total +3 Dex and +2 Cha and/or Con.

Enhanced Fire Use: At each level except first, a Fire Elemental Monolith chooses one of these options. It may also take the Extra Option feat for this class feature.


Fiery Discorporation: 1/day, the elemental can use the power Fiery Discorporation, save that it does not need to make a will save to succeed, and it does not affect anything worn or carried. In addition, anyone seeing the elemental use this ability must succeed on a Spot Check with DC 10+HD+Dex mod to realize it has not died, since dissolving into their element is what Elementals do when they actually die. Since the elemental does not exist while discorporated, it does not regain abilities with a limited use per day.

Posting them seperate.  Sorry it took so long, my computer was sent in to be fixed right before I moved back to college on the other side of the Country, so it took a while.

 AIR ELEMENTAL MONOLITH

Hit Die: d8
Prerequisites: Air Elemental lv11

Level	Bab	Fort	Ref	Will	Feature
1	+0	+0	+2	+0	Growth, Improved Air Mastery, +1 Dex
2	+1	+0	+3	+0	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
3	+2	+1	+3	+1	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
4	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
5	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
6	+4	+2	+5	+2	Enhanced Air Use, Airy Discorporation[

Class Skills: (2 + Int. Mod.): Escape Artist, Hide, Jump, Move Silently.

Proficiencies: An Air Elemental Monolith gains no additional proficiencies with weapons or armour.

Features:

Growth: The elemental can assume Gargantuan size. It's slams deal 3d8 damage when Gargantuan,

Improved Air Mastery: The penalty airborne creatures take from Air Mastery is enhanced to -1 per 4 HD

Ability Increases: An Air Elemental Monolith receives a bonus to its Dexterity score at every level except 5th. At 6th level these bonuses total +5 Dex.

Enhanced Air Use: At each level except first, an Air Elemental Monolith chooses one of these options. It may also take the Extra Option feat for this class feature.



Airy Discorporation: 1/day, the elemental can use the power Fiery Discorporation, save that it dissolves into air and targets air instead of open flame, it does not need to make a will save to succeed, and it does not affect anything worn or carried. In addition, anyone seeing the elemental use this ability must succeed on a Spot Check with DC 10+HD+Dex mod to realize it has not died, since dissolving into their element is what Elementals do when they actually die. Since the elemental does not exist while discorporated, it does not regain abilities with a limited use per day.

Yeah, those all look pretty nice overall.

My only critique is that you put all four in a single post, which isn't that convenient for reading/indexing.

Sorry!
Now I just need to finish up the Omnimental.(which oddly enough is turning out to be very castery and focused more on manipulating the elements)
Then I can get started on the Primal Elementals!(Which really only included another size increase and iterative slams so I'm making them capable of enhancing their abilities by converting their element into a more primal version for the 20th level capstone and outright defying the normal behaviors of their elements for the 35th level capstone to do thinks like make vaccuums for air or floating islands for earth.)

Text for improved oppressive heat references blistering heat.

Fixed, thanks!

AIR ELEMENTAL MONOLITH

Hit Die: d8
Prerequisites: Air Elemental lv11

Level	Bab	Fort	Ref	Will	Feature
1	+0	+0	+2	+0	Growth, Improved Air Mastery, +1 Dex
2	+1	+0	+3	+0	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
3	+2	+1	+3	+1	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
4	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
5	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Air Use, +1 Dex
6	+4	+2	+5	+2	Enhanced Air Use, Airy Discorporation[

Class Skills: (2 + Int. Mod.): Escape Artist, Hide, Jump, Move Silently.

Proficiencies: An Air Elemental Monolith gains no additional proficiencies with weapons or armour.

Features:

Growth: The elemental can assume Gargantuan size. It's slams deal 3d8 damage when Gargantuan,

Improved Air Mastery: The penalty airborne creatures take from Air Mastery is enhanced to -1 per 4 HD

Ability Increases: An Air Elemental Monolith receives a bonus to its Dexterity score at every level except 5th. At 6th level these bonuses total +5 Dex.

Enhanced Air Use: At each level except first, an Air Elemental Monolith chooses one of these options. It may also take the Extra Option feat for this class feature.



Airy Discorporation: 1/day, the elemental can use the power Fiery Discorporation, save that it dissolves into air and targets air instead of open flame, it does not need to make a will save to succeed, and it does not affect anything worn or carried. In addition, anyone seeing the elemental use this ability must succeed on a Spot Check with DC 10+HD+Dex mod to realize it has not died, since dissolving into their element is what Elementals do when they actually die. Since the elemental does not exist while discorporated, it does not regain abilities with a limited use per day.


EARTH ELEMENTAL MONOLITH

Hit Die: d12
Prerequisites: Earth Elemental lv11

Level	Bab	Fort	Ref	Will	Feature
1	+0	+2	+0	+0	Growth, Improved Earth Mastery, +1 Str
2	+1	+3	+0	+0	Enhanced Earth Use, +1 Con
3	+2	+3	+1	+1	Enhanced Earth Use, +1 Str
4	+3	+4	+1	+1	Enhanced Earth Use, +1 Con
5	+3	+4	+1	+1	Enhanced Earth Use, +1 Str
6	+4	+5	+2	+2	Enhanced Earth Use, Earthy Discorporation

Class Skills: (2 + Int. Mod.): Appraise, Hide, Intimidate, Knowledge (Architecture and Engineering, Dungeoneering, Geography, Nature).

Proficiencies: An Earth Elemental Monolith gains no additional proficiencies with weapons or armour.

Features:

Growth: The elemental can assume Gargantuan size. It's slams deal 3d8 damage when Gargantuan

Improved Earth Mastery: The bonus gained from Earth Mastery is enhanced to +1 per 4 HD

Ability Increases: An Earth Elemental Monolith receives a bonus to its Strength score at every odd level except, and a bonus to it's Constitution score at every even level except 6th. At 5th level these bonuses total +3 Dex and +2 Con.

Enhanced Earth Use: At each level except first, an Earth Elemental Monolith chooses one of these options. It may also take the Extra Option feat for this class feature.



Earthy Discorporation: 1/day, the elemental can use the power Fiery Discorporation, save that it dissolves into earth and targets earth instead of open flame, it does not need to make a will save to succeed, and it does not affect anything worn or carried. In addition, anyone seeing the elemental use this ability must succeed on a Spot Check with DC 10+HD+Dex mod to realize it has not died, since dissolving into their element is what Elementals do when they actually die. Since the elemental does not exist while discorporated, it does not regain abilities with a limited use per day.



FIRE ELEMENTAL MONOLITH

Hit Die: d8
Prerequisites: Fire Elemental lv11

Level	Bab	Fort	Ref	Will	Feature
1	+0	+0	+2	+0	Growth, Improved Burn, +1 Dex
2	+1	+0	+3	+0	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Cha or Con
3	+2	+1	+3	+1	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Dex
4	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Cha or Con
5	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Fire Use, +1 Dex
6	+4	+2	+5	+2	Enhanced Fire Use, Fiery Discorporation

Class Skills: (2 + Int. Mod.): The Fire Elemental Monolith's class skills are Concentration, Escape Artist, and Intimidate.

Proficiencies: A Fire Elemental Monolith gains no additional proficiencies with weapons or armour.

Features:

Growth: The elemental can assume Gargantuan size. It's slams deal 3d8 damage when Gargantuan.

Improved Burn: The damage die from Burn change to d8's

Ability Increases: A Fire Elemental Monolith receives a bonus to its Dexterity score at every odd level except, and a bonus to either it's Charisma or Constitution scores at every even level except 6th. At 6th level these bonuses total +3 Dex and +2 Cha and/or Con.

Enhanced Fire Use: At each level except first, a Fire Elemental Monolith chooses one of these options. It may also take the Extra Option feat for this class feature.


Fiery Discorporation: 1/day, the elemental can use the power Fiery Discorporation, save that it does not need to make a will save to succeed, and it does not affect anything worn or carried. In addition, anyone seeing the elemental use this ability must succeed on a Spot Check with DC 10+HD+Dex mod to realize it has not died, since dissolving into their element is what Elementals do when they actually die. Since the elemental does not exist while discorporated, it does not regain abilities with a limited use per day.


WATER ELEMENTAL MONOLITH

Hit Die: d8
Prerequisites: Water Elemental lv11

Level	Bab	Fort	Ref	Will	Feature
1	+0	+0	+2	+0	Growth, Improved Air Mastery, +1 Con
2	+1	+0	+3	+0	Enhanced Water Use, +1 Con
3	+2	+1	+3	+1	Enhanced Water Use, +1 Con
4	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Water Use, +1 Con
5	+3	+1	+4	+1	Enhanced Water Use, +1 Con
6	+4	+2	+5	+2	Enhanced Water Use, Watery Discorporation

Class Skills: (2 + Int. Mod.): Escape Artist, Hide, Move Silently, and Swim.

Proficiencies: A Water Elemental Monolith gains no additional proficiencies with weapons or armour.

Features:

Growth: The elemental can assume Gargantuan size. It's slams deal 3d8 damage when Gargantuan.

Improved Water Mastery: The penalty creatures take from Water Mastery is enhanced to -1 per 4 HD

Ability Increases: A Water Elemental Monolith receives a bonus to its Constitution score at every level except 6th. At 6th level these bonuses total +5 Con.

Enhanced Water Use: At each level except first, a Water Elemental Monolith chooses one of these options. It may also take the Extra Option feat for this class feature.


Watery Discorporation: 1/day, the elemental can use the power Fiery Discorporation, save that it dissolves into water and targets water instead of open flame, it does not need to make a will save to succeed, and it does not affect anything worn or carried. In addition, anyone seeing the elemental use this ability must succeed on a Spot Check with DC 10+HD+Dex mod to realize it has not died, since dissolving into their element is what Elementals do when they actually die. Since the elemental does not exist while discorporated, it does not regain abilities with a limited use per day.

Monsters with darkvision can see trough any Darkness whitout trouble if I'm not mistaken. However Deeper Darkness can only be bypassed by something like a Devil's "See trough every darkness" ability.

Fixed claws typo.

Infernal memories looks pretty nice, but also a bit too strong if you ask me. With infernals such as the Nupperibo, it would mean gaining Rage as a feat. Class skills and monster hybrid (that would normally cost you a feat by itself) are already pretty good if you ask me.

Umbralocation seems good as it is.

Thx!
Actually, the Darkness spell also blocks Darkvision, since it is magical in nature, seehttp://www.d20srd.org/srd/spells/darkness.htm
Also removed the class features bit for the Infernal memories feat.

So, where is the Living-Positive plane, Undead-negative plane described? I don't think I've seen that specifically outlined. Also, I always thought undead lacked souls, being simply animated bodies. Death, usually, releases a soul to the afterlife, while resurrecting the dead usually requires the willingness of the soul to return to the body. I guess I can see most intelligent undead keeping their soul. *shrug*

Libris Mortis states that Undead have a link to the negative energy plane, and evolved undead is what happens when that link gets bigger.
As for living things, most of them aren't as full of positive energy as undead are of negative energy(shown by the fact that living things don't usually have healing abilities in contrast to undead who cause ability damage and how undead don't die on the negative energy plane while living can die on the positive energy plane) so the positive energy plane is 'merely' where their souls come from, as opposed to something they are continually linked to.

Darknessbringer: 1/day per HD the Tiefling can use Darkness as a SLA. If she uses her Darkness on her weapon, she can add her Int to to Hit and Damage rolls with that weapon for the duration of the SLA. While the effect lasts,

You left a bit out at the end.

I thought up a feat when I saw that this guy had done a pathfinder conversion for symbionts and a way to make them as well as new ones here(http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=285089). I put some alternate variants in case you thought one of them was better

(for pathfinder)
Child of the Collective[Racial]
And the mother smiled, for her new child was loyal, dependable, and would aid it's siblings.
Prerequisites: At least 1 level of Deepspawn, Craft Seru
Benefit: You can now use Spawn Child for any type of Seru without having to Gene Devour them, and can direct them at birth to attach to a specific creature or group, although they may conflict with their host normally.

Here are two possible different prequisites if you don't want to force people to get two feats and spellcasting levels first
Prerequisites: At least 1 level of Deepspawn, 8 ranks in Knowledge (Dungeoneering)
Prerequisites: At least 1 level of Deepspawn, 8 ranks in Knowledge (Dungeoneering) and any one Craft skill

Or you could make the Hoard feat a prerequisite and use this
Benefit: You can now use Spawn Child for any type of Seru without having to Gene Devour them so long as you have gp in your Hoard equal to at least it's crafting cost. You do not lose money from your Hoard when spawning them. You can direct them at birth to attach to a specific creature or anyone in a specific group, although they may conflict with their host normally.